Sunday, April 17, 2016

Peer Review for Jake Gyles

Jake needs the A so I am here to help

The content for Jake's project can be found HERE.

Activity 5: Making a Content Suggestion

Your introduction is very good but I believe that it may be too personal for this type of project. I would focus on more statements that can be considered factual rather than personal statements because people may read them and take them as purely opinion. The introduction should be less of a personal statement, 

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