Activity 5: Make a Content Suggestion
HERE is the Link to Alex Eulano's Production Report
Reading the adaptation of the outline item for production report 11b I think you've done a very good job and are off to a great start. One main suggestion that I would include for your content is to include facts rather than a section that is "my honest opinion" because this is supposed to be a public argument and not include any first person statements. By saying that it is your honest opinion it devalues the credibility of the project due to you having low credibility being just an undergraduate student. Another suggestion that I would give to you is to include information that you can cite and then cite this information in your project. The second part of this adaptation would be to get rid of assumptions such as saying that the whole world would be livid because this is not an argument but just an assumption.
No comments:
Post a Comment