Sunday, April 10, 2016

Peer Review for Ben Macklin

Peer Review: Better our friends around us

LINK to Ben Backlin's Production Report

Activity 5: Make a Content Suggestion 

Your rough cut in the production report is a good start but seems very broad and rushed. I would try to be more specific in your introduction and when you make the video essay I would be sure to include the argument and position on your topic in an interesting manner. One major content suggestion that I would give to you is to is to find images and videos through the internet in order to improve your project. You said you will provide pictures to help immerse the audience which is an amazing start. One major thing I would add that you did not mention is subtitles or words to help guide the audience through your arguments and keep them focused on the screen through reading because if you only have pictures and videos they often will wander off. 

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