Thursday, May 5, 2016

Peer Review Jake Gyles

The rough draft for Jake can be found HERE

I think that overall you have a great video! I enjoy how you are talking throughout the entire video and have pictures that are interesting and keep the viewer watching. Another thing that I enjoy is how you put text over the videos while you talked which helped in following your ideas. One thing I would change is I would add more pictures of your blog work. Additionally I would talk about each individual project and genre. This would help guide you in your overview of the year. Showing an example of each would help the viewers relate and understand what your projects are. Overall you are off to a good start and I am excited to see the final project!

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